W.G. Sebald Meets Captain Underpants
By LAWRENCE GOODMAN
Extremely Loud & Incredibly Close
By Jonathan Safran Foer
368 pages. Houghton Mifflin. $24.95.
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I’ll begin, at the risk of ruining it for you, with the ending. It’s a series
of photos, 15 in all, taken just before the Twin Towers fell. An upside-down
man, whose identity is still unknown, leaps to his death to escape the
spreading inferno. You are supposed to,
I think, flip through the photos at a fairly rapid clip, as though you were
watching a Kinetoscope, except in this case the action runs in reverse. The
jumper starts close to the ground and, with each turning page, rises higher and
higher. You watch a scene from 9/11 unfold backwards.
I am sure there are any number of high-minded literary precedents for this
montage, but the reference that comes most immediately to mind for me is Captain Underpants.
I happen to be reading The Adventures of
Captain Underpants and the Wrath of the Wicked Wedgie Woman to my four-year-old
son right now, and like the other books in the series, it contains a section entitled
“Flip-O-Rama”—kids flip through a series of images to produce a mini-movie.
Now Underpants author Dav Pilkey has not, as far as I know, come up with the
innovation of running events in reverse order, but he does, like Foer, use the
technique to represent gruesome scenes. "Flip-O-Rama" is always part
of a section in his books called “The Extremely Graphic Violence Chapter.” The
pictures depict the child heroes of the series, whose age is probably pretty
near to Extremely Loud’s protagonist,
punching out their enemies, banging them with planks of wood, and then
rejoicing at their victory.
I happen to like "Flip-O-Rama." It takes the graphic violence that’s
so pervasive in the world and puts it under the hero’s control; it makes it
harmless, fun, and goofy. Unfortunately, that’s exactly what Foer has done to
9/11. He has taken the ineffable horror of that day and made it tangible in a
way the violates the event’s sanctity. Try flipping through those images a few
dozen times. The effect is even more inuring than watching the footage of the
falling towers over and over again on television, though in this case Foer is
not just deadening our senses, he is inviting us to imagine we can undo the
World Trade Center attack. Just like with Flip-O-Rama, you’re offered infantile
wish-fulfillment.
Extremely Loud & Incredibly Close
is imbued with a quintessentially American faith that imagination and the
powers of language can heal all manner of grief. Oskar’s grandfather’s
suffering through the firebombing of Dresden in World War II is equated with
Oskar’s 9/11 trauma which, in turn, is equated with the nuclear holocaust in
Hiroshima. Yes, they all involve a great deal of destruction and civilian
deaths, but they are also distinctly different events and their victims occupy
different moral standings. But Foer seems so smitten by his purple prose that
he believes these three apocalypses can be linked simply because language
allows them to be. To hell with reality, ethics, history, and respect for
people’s suffering.
Why does this have to even be a novel about 9/11? Oskar Schell, the nine-year-old
boy at the center of the novel, is an idiosyncratic, jaundiced sort of kid—a
more or less delightful creation—but his sensibility is really not all that
different from any other well-healed Manhattanite child. His expedition around
the five boroughs in search of the lock that fits with the key he finds in his
dead father’s closet does not prompt any particularly profound ruminations on
the WTC bombing, terrorism, President Bush, or any of the issues that arose
from the ashes of that inferno.
Oskar’s struggles mainly concern getting used to the idea that his mother may
find a boyfriend and learning to understand that bad things do happen to good
people. Foer has said in interviews he wanted to strip 9/11 of all the
political rhetoric and focus solely on the grief it caused, but in doing this,
he has wiped out both the event’s specificity and enormity. Oskar pretty much
would have gone through the same sort of emotional turmoil if his father had
died in a bizarre gardening accident.
This may be something of a stretch, but I think an unacknowledged influence
here is the late German writer, W.G. Sebald. I say that because (1)
Sebald often wrote about the impact of past historical traumas on his
character’s present day consciousness; (2) he argued that the Germans had been
wrongly victimized during World War II by the Allies’ firebombing raids, which,
in so far as he links 9/11’s victims with Dresden’s, seems to be a position
Foer embraces too; and (3) Sebald made great use of pictures and historical
photographs in his novels. When Sebald employs though images it’s part of his
commitment to track à la Proust the meanderings
of memory. You understand when the photo doesn’t gel with what one of Sebald’s
characters has just experienced because that is the nature of retrospection,
especially when it’s been fractured by a traumatic event like the Holocaust.
Foer’s use of photos though seem mainly intended to stake his claim as a
genuinely experimental writer, which is to say that from the reader’s
point-of-view they come across as largely gratuitous. Oskar goes into a
stationery store and sees on a blotter where customers try out pens and then
finds his father's name. We then get not one but four color pictures of the
blotter as though Foer sensed his verbal description was not adequate or maybe
his readers didn’t know what it looked like. We also get pictures of keys,
Laurence Olivier playing Hamlet, turtles mating and a cat flying through the
air. It doesn’t add up to much. Mostly, it serves to give post-modernism a bad
name.
There is no doubt that Foer is an immensely gifted writer with huge promise and
an amazing career ahead of him. But Extremely
Loud is not the book which shows this. It is a hodge-podge of borrowed
styles, half-baked ideas, and superficial musings. Unfortunately, it is also
intellectually reckless.